a tanka on Mid-Autumn Moon Festival!

[broom_rider]

Round, bright, and golden
full Moon like a gong of gods.
I'll bang the gong now -
will you hear it, oh my Muse?
Will you visit me tonight?

Comments

[jade-teacup.livejournal.com]

I like! Did your muse hear the sounding of the gong.

I had only a part of a poem:

Are the clouds a black veil?
Are these raindrops the moon's tears?
Is she crying for me....


I didn't finish it. After a night of mostly rain, today is cooler, crisp and not humid....the sun is out and the sky a blue that is so soft and fresh.