New Art - Chiba Yusuke

[broom_rider]

Yeah! It's finally finished! Add Gretsch guitars to cars, guns, and other objects that I find hard to draw!:)

I have a question, though: What do you think of the composition? I mean the placement and the proportions of the two main picture elements? Should I made the one with the face smaller/higher? Any other suggestions? Thank you!

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Всё, закончила! Ура! Добавьте гитары Gretsch в список объектов, которые тяжело рисовать!

Есть вопрос: что думаете про композицию картинки? В плане пропорций и расположения двух основных элементов? Надо ли с этим ещё поиграть - скажем, сделать панель с лицом поменьше, или поднять её выше, etc. - или не стОит? Что скажете?

Comments

[broom--rider.livejournal.com]

Thank you!
That's how I did it first - the head and hand in right proportions to each other. But then they "ask" to be in the right positions to each other too - and that leaves too much of the empty space, and the comics-like frames just don't work, if you know what I mean :(
I'll try to play with it a bit tomorrow, with a fresh eyes... Thank you again!

[scowling-hermit.livejournal.com]

It does look like it'd be difficult to arrange that way.

How about putting them side by side -- it'd be almost like a (super cool) comic.

[broom--rider.livejournal.com]

That's, actually, an interesting idea, I am going to try it! Thanks! :)

[scowling-hermit.livejournal.com]

:D