New Art - Chiba Yusuke

[broom_rider]

Yeah! It's finally finished! Add Gretsch guitars to cars, guns, and other objects that I find hard to draw!:)

I have a question, though: What do you think of the composition? I mean the placement and the proportions of the two main picture elements? Should I made the one with the face smaller/higher? Any other suggestions? Thank you!

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Всё, закончила! Ура! Добавьте гитары Gretsch в список объектов, которые тяжело рисовать!

Есть вопрос: что думаете про композицию картинки? В плане пропорций и расположения двух основных элементов? Надо ли с этим ещё поиграть - скажем, сделать панель с лицом поменьше, или поднять её выше, etc. - или не стОит? Что скажете?

Comments

[scowling-hermit.livejournal.com]

I like it, but I do think the composition would be better if his head and hand were the right proportions in relation to each other.

It looks really cool, though -- the guitar looks awesome. :D

[broom--rider.livejournal.com]

Thank you!
That's how I did it first - the head and hand in right proportions to each other. But then they "ask" to be in the right positions to each other too - and that leaves too much of the empty space, and the comics-like frames just don't work, if you know what I mean :(
I'll try to play with it a bit tomorrow, with a fresh eyes... Thank you again!

[scowling-hermit.livejournal.com]

It does look like it'd be difficult to arrange that way.

How about putting them side by side -- it'd be almost like a (super cool) comic.

[broom--rider.livejournal.com]

That's, actually, an interesting idea, I am going to try it! Thanks! :)

[scowling-hermit.livejournal.com]

:D

[vamm-goda.livejournal.com]

I really like the way you split the composition up like that - it's very unique and gives a really nice feel to the image. The guitar is really nicely done, I love the detail in it!

[broom--rider.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much! Glad that you like the picture! The guitar was a pain in the neck to draw, and I really appreciate the compliment! :)

[el-set.livejournal.com]

Нормуль. Объективно - попробуй лицо повыше поднять.

[broom--rider.livejournal.com]

как -то так? По-моему так а) - слишком много пустого чёрного, и b) - напрашиваются соразмерные друг-другу пропорции руки и головы. Если их таковыми сделать, то вся концепция рамок теряется, и картинка превращается не в просто портрет, на который зачем-то наложили чёрный, не?

[el-set.livejournal.com]

Не, оставь как было.

[broom--rider.livejournal.com]

по-моему тоже... Спасибо, что взглянул.

[jade-teacup.livejournal.com]

I like it, as it is. The artistic skill is amazing.

[broom--rider.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Yes, I left it as it it for now - the more I am playing with it, the more I like this version :)